This interim critic gave me a perspective on the way my work was headed. Below is the typed out version of the paper critic and below that is what I gained from speaking to other students and my tutors about my ideas and mockups.
Do the visual solutions clearly communicate the central issue?
The central issue is the equality of the amount of women in the work force and that it has increased and it is a positive thing.
Is the central issue easy to identify in both solutions?
Yes, they both represent the diversity of the roles women have within the labour force. They also promote support for other women.
If so, why?
The drawings of the women represent the different roles. The text emphasises the issue and the idea of support.
If not, why?
I didn't realise that it was promoting the equality. Maybe that idea could be a little stronger. If it's about equality, maybe use more positive colours?
Are the posters visually engaging?
Yes.
If so, why?
I think that the hands are really cool. The range of different illustrations is interesting.
Without the text on the bottom, the poster does not succeed in showing my concept at all. It may look nice but does not service it's purpose. I will have to restart this poster again. I am finding it very hard to create another poster that shows the concept and is a different style to my first one.

Just looking at the figures, it is hard to tell that they are from different time periods. If I want to carry on with doing them like that, then I need to make it way more obvious and maybe look at stats from a wider time period so I can do more specialised figures. I could also look into art styles from these time periods to change the figures into them. To make the transition through the time periods look like improvement for women, i could make them steadily get happier. If not, I should go the other way and look at only a wide variety of professions and maybe talk about them in the subtext. Also the background colour is not a colour that screams feminist or even womanly so that needs to be changed. Purple and white are the official feminist colours so I should look into using those.